Friday, September 29, 2023

"George F. Walker revisits old characters in timely play about white working class"/ "Bronte: The World Without is bland and boring"

Nov. 28, 2016 "George F. Walker revisits old characters in timely play about white working class": Today I found this theatre review by J. Nelly Nestruck in the Globe and Mail:



  • Title The Damage Done
  • Written by George F. Walker
  • Directed by Ken Gass
  • Starring Wes Berger and Sarah Murphy-Dyson
  • Venue Citadel
  • City Toronto

If you want to understand the white working class, you could do worse than turn to George F. Walker.

Since the 1980s, the Toronto playwright has been drawing inspiration from the demographic he grew up in – you might call it the white poor, or white working poor, depending on your politics; the people now the subject of increased media scrutiny (and perhaps scapegoating) following the rise of Donald Trump.

In The Damage DoneWalker returns to a pair of characters he first created in 1992 named Bobby and Tina. These two Toronto east-enders first appeared aged 19, struggling with an unexpected pregnancy, in his much-produced young-adult play, Tough! 

In 2013, Walker unexpectedly returned to the two characters aged 21, dealing with a second pregnancy in a more problematic two-hander called Moss Park – named after the Toronto neighbourhood that became one of the poorest in the city after the deindustrialization of the 1970s.

Now, in this latest work getting its world premiere from director Ken Gass’s company Canadian Rep at a small theatre located in the real-life Moss Park, Bobby and Tina are pushing 40.

Fifteen years after finally calling it quits as a couple, they meet back at the park where the first two plays were set.

In the intervening years, Tina (Sarah Murphy-Dyson) has moved up and out of the old neighbourhood with their two children. With the help of long-term boyfriends, she put herself through school for social work – and, while the relationships didn’t work out, she now has a career and a house in the suburbs.

Meanwhile, Bobby (Wes Berger), who has only been tenuously involved in the lives of his daughters, still hasn’t settled on what to do with his life

He’s just learned how to operate a forklift, but is faking an ankle injury to get workers’ compensation – and, as Tina puts it, still dreams of the things he could be doing, instead of what he should be doing. (Toying with writing a play, the loveable lunkhead seems more of a stand-in for Walker than ever.)

Critic Jerry Wasserman has summarized the thrust of Walker’s major East End plays of the 1980s and early 1990s as being about “the attempt, mostly by women, to re-educate the corrupted and generally bewildered men responsible for the intolerable status quo.”

Tina, who always tries to project the image that she’s tough and together, starts off thinking she’s in one of those plays. 

As Bobby puts it, “I screw up; you still think it’s your job to straighten me out.” This time around, however, it’s really Tina who needs straightening out. She has to go away and wants Bobby to move into her house and take care of their teenagers .

The depths of her despair are only gradually revealed – though the Neil Young song the title comes from is a clue. Can Bobby finally be there for her?

All three Bobby and Tina plays are unusual in Walker’s sprawling canon in that they follow the classical unities – that’s to say, they tell a single story in a single place in real time.

This actually leads them to be less naturalistic than some of Walker’s other family plays, full of contrivance and exposition masked as argument. 

Both Berger and Murphy-Dyson do a fine enough job of finding their footing in this compressed atmosphere – but Walker’s repetitive structure of rehashed past, then revelation, makes it difficult for an audience to stay with them in the moment.

Walker’s play asks whether, to revisit the title of one of his earlier plays, better living is really possible when you grow up the way Bobby and Tina did – even if you get out of poverty and move to a nice suburb, can the mind ever find security?

In Gass’s production, which he designed himself, the stage is covered in dead leaves – and Joey Condello’s lighting design gives the impression of clouds passing. 

Maybe a production that more aggressively explored the artificiality of the writing, rather than trying to make it seem like a walk in the park, might be more satisfying. 

Because it’s clear this east-end space in which Bobby and Tina have been meeting for 20 years is a mental one as much as a physical one – and where 

Bobby has learned to exist comfortably within it, 

Tina still feels uneasy over leaving it.

A premiere of a Walker play is less of an event than it once was: At age 69, he’s more prolific than ever, averaging two plays a year since 2010. 

At this point, I’d be more interested in younger directors revisiting his older, larger-scale East End plays such as ove and Anger (1989) and Escape from Happiness (1991) to see what his white, working-class characters might have to say now to a world in the throes of Trumpism and a city in the wake of Fordism.



My opinion:

This is a life tip:

He’s just learned how to operate a forklift, but is faking an ankle injury to get workers’ compensation – and, as Tina puts it, still dreams of the things he could be doing, instead of what he should be doing. 


This is a writing tip:

This actually leads them to be less naturalistic than some of Walker’s other family plays, full of contrivance and exposition masked as argument. 




Jun. 23, 2018 "Bronte: The World Without is bland and boring": Today I found this theatre play review by J. Kelly Nestruck in the Globe and Mail:


Title: Brontë: The World Without 

  • Written by: Jordi Mand
  • Director: Vanessa Porteous
  • Actors: Beryl Bain, Jessica B. Hill, Andrea Rankin
  • Company: The Stratford Festival
  • Venue: Studio Theatre
  • City: Stratford, Ont.
  • Year: Runs to Oct. 13, 2018
1 star out of 4

Charlotte. Emily. And Anne. The Brontë Sisters.

You can almost sing it to the tune of The Schuyler Sisters from Hamilton: An American Musical.

And with a young female playwright holding the pen and a diverse cast, the Stratford Festival’s new play, Brontë: The World Without, promised just such a similarly fresh, contemporary take on the 19th-century English writers who brought us the novels Jane EyreWuthering Heights and The Tenant of Wildfell Hall, respectively.


Unfortunately, what’s actually made it to the Stratford stage is a dull non-drama that smells of a commissioning process gone completely awry.

Brontë: The World Without does indeed show us a world without – without conflict, without characterization, without substance or style.


Without a clear reason for existing on stage, beyond the brand appeal of the Brontës.

Playwright Jordi Mand gives us scenes as flat as roadkill from the lives of Charlotte, Emily and Anne, all set in the parlour of their father’s parsonage.

The first is all economic exposition as Charlotte (Beryl Bain), Emily (Jessica B. Hill) and Anne (Andrea Rankin) sit around drinking weak tea and talking about how little money they have and how they might make ends meet.

As each possibility is crossed off the list – selling this or that possession, opening a school, tapping into a small inheritance – it’s a long wait for them to turn to the idea that they might try to publish the poetry that they’ve been writing in private.

It’s such a long wait, in fact, that it takes until the second scene for Charlotte to finally have her unbelievable light-bulb moment. 

The rest of the space before intermission is taken up by Charlotte and Anne trying to convince the fragile and frightened Emily to send her poetry off to a publisher under a male pseudonym along with them.


The one thing everyone who walks into Brontë: The World Without should know is that Charlotte, Emily and Anne Brontë were writers. 

It seems perverse to try to make the entire first half of a play ride on suspense over whether or not they will even try.

Overheard at intermission: “I hope somebody stabs someone with a quill in the second half.”

No such luck. But there is the potential for drama between these underwritten writers when a thin brown-paper package returns from a publisher. Clearly, two of the Brontës have had their first novels accepted and one has not.

Having made the mistake of reading the program notes before the play began, 

this was another tedious scene of non-suspense waiting for the package to be opened – but I remained curious to see how the sisters would handle this moment of division.

Alas, the discovery of who was rejected is where Mand ends her scene. 

And the next one picks up after such a long enough passage of time that the whole issue is rendered moot.

Director Vanessa Porteous, as if realizing that the play she’s been hired to direct is missing, stages long scene changes set to songs. Entire songs by Regina Spektor, Willow Smith and Meshell Ndegeocello.


These little music videos fill out the lives of the characters in a more lively way than the play itself. They wake you up, anyway – as Charlotte, Emily and Anne walk in and out of doors on fast-forward, shoot each other looks and furiously scribble with quills.

But then they’re back to quarrelling and quibbling, speaking flavourless dialogue that feels neither period nor contemporary.

Biographical tidbits are occasionally revealed, but there are no peeks inside of these iconic authors’ minds or imaginations, except into Anne’s in the very final moments of the play.

Not a poem is read. Not a novel discussed.

Love affairs,

 an alcoholic and opioid-addicted brother, 

a trip to London by Charlotte and Anne where they reveal to their publishers that they are women 

– all these potentially dramatizable elements are kept off the stage.

A character’s death is signalled entirely by coughing into a napkin and then showing that there is blood on it. This is a play premiering in 2018?

The cast is talented – with Hill, in particular, bringing an on-the-edge element to the character of Emily.

And Mand proved herself a talented writer with a show called Between the Sheets, developed and premiered by the independent company Nightwood in Toronto back in 2012.

The largest not-for-profit theatre company in the country, with all its resources, seems to have transformed her into a bland one. Stratford has let her down and, in turn, audiences by letting this pointless period piece make it all the way to production.



https://www.theglobeandmail.com/arts/theatre-and-performance/reviews/article-review-bronte-the-world-without-is-a-bland-and-boring-period-drama/




Sept. 15, 2023 My opinion: If you want to make a story more interesting, you have to have drama, conflict, and tension.

I don't write plays or watch plays.

I watch TV and movies.  I have done screenwriting for years.


Here are the other 2 blog posts of the week:


"In a year of anti-Muslim vitriol, major brand advertisers promote inclusion"/ "Mining association launches regulations to diversify mostly 'male and white' industry"

http://badcb.blogspot.com/2023/09/in-year-of-anti-muslim-vitriol-major.html


"Three ways to figure out whether a company is really invested in change"/ "‘Woke’ ESG regulations leading to policy chaos with worst yet to come"

http://badcb.blogspot.com/2023/09/three-ways-to-figure-out-whether.html



Tues. Sept. 26, 2023 "Developer credits GST rebate for 5,000 rental unit plan": Today I found this article by Ben Cousins on BNN Bloomberg.  This is some good news:

A Toronto developer is crediting the federal government’s plan to remove GST from new rental buildings for its plan to bring 5,000 new housing units across the country.

Dream Unlimited Corp. announced plans to bring housing projects to urban centres in Ottawa, Saskatoon, Calgary and Toronto totalling more than 5,000 units.

Earlier this month, Ottawa announced it would remove the GST from new rental builds as part of its plan to boost the housing supply in Canada and address housing prices. Developers have largely applauded the move, as it represents about a 10 per cent savings on new projects.

“This legislation is a game changer for the development industry, and more importantly for Canadians,” Michael J. Cooper, president and chief responsible officer of Dream Unlimited, wrote in a news release Monday.  “The housing crisis has impacted every urban centre from coast to coast. What this legislation unlocks is our ability to get shovels into the ground quickly at a time when it’s never been more critical to build new homes.”

https://www.bnnbloomberg.ca/developer-credits-gst-rebate-for-5-000-rental-unit-plan-1.1976111


Tues. Sept. 26, 2023"Black 13-year-old who was treated like 'potential thief' by Vancouver boss awarded $27K by tribunal": Today I found this article on Yahoo and CBC.  

A 13-year-old Black girl who was wrongly singled out on suspicion of theft by her manager at a Vancouver juice bar has been awarded more than $27,000 in damages for discrimination.

The B.C. Human Rights Tribunal has found that because of her race and sex, the young worker was subjected to a "poisoned" work environment at Heirloom, a restaurant and juice bar in the upscale South Granville neighbourhood.

The teen's identity has been protected by the tribunal, and she is referred to as AB in a decision handed down on Friday. It says bias drove manager Nicholas Stone's decision to confront the teen — and none of her co-workers — about shortages in the cash register.

The encounter left her in tears.

"AB was singled out as a potential thief, despite there being no evidence to that effect," tribunal member Amber Prince wrote.

"In the absence of an explanation, Mr. Stone's heightened suspicion, scrutiny, and monitoring of AB is consistent with persistent and harmful stereotypes that Black people are prone to theft and that Black children are more adult and less innocent than other children."

After the original confrontation, and despite the restaurant owner's evidence that cash shortages are common and usually the result of innocent mistakes, AB was relegated to working in the back of the store, the decision says. When she quit her job, Stone declined to write her a reference letter.

Prince said it was likely discrimination was also behind those decisions.

"In arriving at these findings, I am not concluding that Mr. Stone intended to discriminate against AB," the decision says.

"None of us are immune from operating on unconscious stereotypes, given that such stereotypes continue to seep into our collective psyche."

https://ca.yahoo.com/news/black-13-old-treated-potential-220742597.html


My opinion: I felt like justice was served for the the 13 yr old.  Did they have cameras on the till?  I have worked at the Soup Place #2 and Juice Place #1 where there are cameras on the till.


Wed. Sept. 27, 2023 "Target closing 9 stores in U.S. due to growing theft problem": Today I found this article on the CBC:


Target said Tuesday that it will close nine stores in four states, including one in New York City's East Harlem neighbourhood, and three in the San Francisco Bay Area, saying that theft and organized retail crime have threatened the safety of its workers and customers.

The closures, which will be effective Oct. 21, also include three stores in Portland, Ore., and two in Seattle. Target said that it still will have a combined 150 stores open in the markets where the closures are taking place. It said it will offer affected workers the opportunity to transfer to other stores.

The Minneapolis retailer said the decision to close the stores was difficult.

"We know that our stores serve an important role in their communities, but we can only be successful if the working and shopping environment is safe for all," Target said in a statement.

Target said it has invested heavily in strategies to prevent theft, such as adding more security workers, using third-party guard services, installing theft-deterrent tools and locking up merchandise. It also has trained store managers and security-team members to protect themselves and de-escalate potential safety issues.

But it noted that it still faced "fundamental challenges" to operate the stores safely — and the business performance at the locations slated for closure was unsustainable.

https://www.cbc.ca/news/business/target-stores-theft-1.6979493


My opinion: They put time, effort, money and resources into solving the problem, but were unable to.  At least the workers can transfer to other stores.

If this happens in the US, it can happen in Canada.



Mon. Sept. 25, 2023 Downtown: I went to downtown for an appointment.


I then took the bus to City Centre.  I bumped into my friend Denny from the Personality Meetup group on the bus.

I went to get a free medium coffee in my thermos at McDonald's.  I redeemed the coffee card of where you buy 7 coffees and get 1 free.  My dad is the one who buys the coffees, and I put the stickers on the card.


Foreign currency exchange : I went to TD and I had a prescription bottle of coins from other countries I found in my home.  The woman said they don't take coins.  I gave her a 20 pesos bill and she said the bill has to be at least a $50 bill.

She told me to go the TD in West Edmonton mall:


"TD Bank offers services for all your banking needs, including foreign currency exchange. With our longer hours and over 50 currencies available, we are ready to help you with all your foreign currency needs whether you are visiting Canada or planning your next trip."


https://www.wem.ca/directory/stores/td-bank-foreign-exchange-centre


Wed. Sept. 27, 2023 Fix my flip phone: 2 days ago, my flip phone stopped working with the screen not showing up, or showing some, or being flipped upside down.  I turned it off for awhile and then turned it back on and it's the same.  I had this phone since 2018.


I went to Rogers at City Centre and they said they can't fix it.  I went to the 3 cell phone repair stores there, and they don't fix flip phones.  You have to buy these parts for it and it's expensive.  You might as well buy a new flip phone.

I went to Rogers, and I waited by reading for 5 min.  They sell flip phones for $111.  I then thought: "Why don't I call all these other cell phone repair stores and maybe they can fix it?"

I went home and called 13 places from West Edmonton mall, Kingsway, and Southgate mall and they all said the same thing.  It was like 20 min. on the phone.  Well it wasn't a lot of physical effort on my part.

I know my mom has an old flip phone that I can use.


Mon. Sept. 25, 2023 The Irrational:


"Alec Mercer is a world-renowned behavioral scientist who lends his expertise to an array of high-stakes cases involving governments, law enforcement and corporations with his unique and unexpected approach to understanding human behavior."

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt16288838/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_0_tt_7_nm_1_q_the%2520irr


My opinion: I saw the pilot.  This was average.  I will record the series and probably will watch all the eps in a couple of weeks.


Sept. 28, 2023 Robyn Hood: 


"Follows Robyn Loxley and anti-authoritarian masked hip-hop band, The Hood, as they call out injustices and fight for freedom and equality in the city of New Nottingham."


https://www.imdb.com/title/tt20918756/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_3_tt_1_nm_7_q_robyn


My opinion: The pilot was mediocre and then I never watched it again.  This seems like something for the CW and their superhero shows.

Friday, September 22, 2023

"I didn’t set out to contribute to rape culture" (TV writer article)/ TV and movie comparisons

Sept. 17, 2016 "I didn’t set out to contribute to rape culture": I found this article by Ellen Vanstone in the Globe and Mail.


I like this article because it's about being a female TV writer and producer, and that is a career that I have wanted since I was a teen: 



I didn’t set out to contribute to rape culture. Like all sensible people, I’m a feminist. Granted, the white, privileged kind who’s gone through life with easy access to education, well-paying jobs, sexual liberation, freedom of speech and the right to trash men and the patriarchy in the most general and vile terms every time something didn’t go my way in matters of life or love.

In short, I never felt particularly personally oppressed. Then I started working in TV drama. 

The revelatory moment – the point at which my complacent-feminist innocence was violently taken from me, leaving me feeling exposed and violated, so to speak – came when I was writing on a series about cops who dealt with the mentally ill.

It might help to know how scripts are written on most TV shows, familiar to anyone who’s seen 30 Rock: A group of writers spends the morning discussing how pod coffee is bad for the environment but what else are we supposed to drink, segues into where to go for lunch, goes for lunch, then spends the afternoon trying not to eat the piles of junk food that seems to come with the furniture in these rooms. 

Somewhere along the way, we hash out

character arcs 

and season arcs 

and put up dozens of colour-coded index cards to keep track of who’s sleeping with whom, 

and whom we want to get rid of when

(I’m referring to the show, but similar dramas in the writing room are not unheard of.)

Once the big picture is more or less sorted out, we focus on specific episodes. 

The room brainstorms ideas and, as the episode moves from pitch page to outline to script, the producer gives “notes” every step of the way, e.g., 

“Does our lead actor have enough to do?” 

or “WTF! I effing hate this! I don’t know WTF is going on!” 

Both kinds of notes can be helpful, since we writers are so mature and know to look for the “note beneath the note” that points to fundamental story problems.

Pitch pages, outlines and scripts also get notes from network executives. 

The series producer owns the show, 

but since the broadcaster is paying up to several million bucks per 43-minute-hour to actually make the show (in return for the right to air it first), 

the network executives get final approval on everything from cast and characters to writing-room staff. 

Everyone understands how important it is to please the network executives.

On the show about cops and the mentally ill, my loss of innocence began when I pitched an episode about an old lady who dies alone in a rundown mansion. 

In the opening scene or “teaser,” her corpse is carted off in an ambulance while neighbourhood kids dare each other to go into the “haunted” house. 

Two of them sneak in. Suddenly, the ghost of the old lady appears at the top of the stairs! She descends toward them, uttering gibberish. The children scream and run. One falls. She’s still coming! … 

Cut to title card and theme song. At the top of Act 1, our cops reveal it’s not a ghost, it’s
another old lady who’s insane and secretly living in the attic. 

Like Rochester’s mad wife in Jane Eyre, the second old lady was stuffed up there years earlier owing to the stigma of mental illness. Our hero cops and menta lhealth workers must now solve the mystery of who she is and how she ended up there.

The room liked the premise and I, with a co-writer, wrote up the pitch page.

Except then the notes started. 

Do there have to be two old ladies? 

Do they have to be so old? 

Are the stakes high enough? 

Can we create an interesting bad guy to attract a big-name guest star? Et cetera.

By the time we went to camera, my dead old lady had turned into a thirtysomething adultress who gets her head bashed in, and my old lady in the attic had turned into a beautiful blond teenager in a basement being held captive by the world’s most adorable predator, Rossif Sutherland.

And I had just co-written a rape episode.

Over the next year, I went from feeling indefinably icky about that episode to rage over how much female rape there is on TV in general. 

The most notorious example is Game of Thrones, winner of nine Creative Arts Emmys last weekend and the most nominated show going into the Primetime Emmy Awards tomorrow. 

After the violent rape of Sansa Stark in Season 5, “geek girl” blogger Tafkar produced a “Statistical Analysis of Rape in Game of Thrones”:

rape acts in Game of Thrones the TV series: 50; 

rape victims in Game of Thrones: 29; 

rape acts in the A Song of Ice and Fire books by George Martin: 214; 

rape victims in ASOIAF: 117.

GoT toned things down in Season 6, but there’s always a new show to pick up the slack, and this season, it looks as if it might be the new HBO series Westworld (premiering Oct. 2). 

In the first episode, set at a resort where humans can interact with lifelike robots, an android played by Evan Rachel Wood is dragged off by her hair to fulfill an older man’s rape fantasy.

Elsewhere, the female rape trope is a staple of shows such as Law & Order: Special Victims Unit, CSI and Criminal Minds, and sprinkled throughout other procedurals such as NCIS, Hawaii Five-O, Bones and The Mentalist.

 t’s used as a back story (usually with graphic flashbacks) for characters such as Elizabeth Jennings in The Americans, raped by her Soviet trainer; 

Norma Bates in Bates Motel, raped in the pilot by a previous owner of the motel, after (we later learn) being raped by her brother as a teen; 

the gang-raped girlfriend Lumen on Season 5 of Dexter; 

Claire Underwood in House of Cards still traumatized by a college rape; 

Jessica Jones’s lead raped by her abductor/keeper; 

Mellie Grant on Scandal raped by her father-in-law.

Rape is also used as a device to motivate male heroes, 

from Tony’s anguish and need for revenge after the rape of his psychiatrist in The Sopranos 

to Ray Velcoro’s anguish and need for revenge – and also a paternity test for his son – after the rape of his wife in Season 2 of True Detective.

Even “quality” shows have rape aplenty: Anna Bates raped on Downton Abbey; 

police sergeant Catherine Cawood driven by the rape of her daughter, who died by suicide, in Happy Valley

Gillian recovering from years of marital rape on Last Tango in Halifax; 

Joan Holloway raped by her fiancé in Mad Men; 

Queen Mary raped by Protestant soldiers in Reign; 

Detective Robin Griffin dealing with fallout from her own prom-night gang rape while solving a child-rape case in Top of the Lake.

The current avalanche of female rape on TV has even become something of a joke. 

As in: “I joke, morbidly,” Sonia Saraiya wrote in Salon, “that my job title has changed from television critic to ‘senior rape correspondent.’ ”

Meanwhile, Hannibal showrunner Bryan Fuller made headlines last season for not using rape, telling Entertainment Weekly, “It’s so overexploited, it becomes callous. … You’re reduced to using shorthand, and I don’t think there can be a shorthand for that violation.”

Note how my repetition of the word “rape” becomes numbing after a while. It’s because seeing something over and over tends to normalize it, and eventually make it meaningless.

During my year of ranting about all this TV rape to anyone who’d listen, I was forced to think about what, exactly, I was mad about. 

Did I want the female-rape trope banned? No. Some shows used it in a way that was respectful to the victim and essential to the story. 

Even the rape factory over at Law & Order: SVU might be defensible: 

According to a 2015 study from Washington State University, SVU’s regular viewers demonstrated “decreased rape-myth acceptance and increased intentions to adhere to expressions of sexual consent.” 

(Viewers of the more popular CSI, on the other hand, indicated “decreased intentions to seek consent.”)

In any case, as a writer, I don’t believe in censorship. I’d never ban anyone from writing or directing rape scenes. What I object to is twofold. 

First: how the trope is overused as a plot device. The sin of bad taste and its potential contribution to moral degradation aside, let’s just say here that the young, beautiful, battered dead female is exhaustingly trite.

The second, bigger problem is with how the crime is aestheticized for the camera. Massive amounts of time and money are spent on hair, makeup and lighting to sexualize rape victims. 

Look at the first scene of the first episode of the lauded French series Spiral, which shows a dead, naked girl covered in blood on a garbage heap. 

I’m willing to bet many minutes, if not hours, were spent lighting her and positioning the camera in order to capture the silhouette of the erect nipple of her right breast against a background of black tires. 

The only onscreen rape I’ve seen that was presented in a believable – i.e., unsexy – manner was in the movie Deliverance. I’m not saying we need more scenes such as Ned Beatty in his underwear scrabbling in the mud while being treated like a pig, but at least it didn’t prettify the crime.

One show that really made me angry was The Fall, in which Gillian Anderson’s character pursues the world’s second-most adorable predator, played by Jamie Dornan. 

As he stalks his victims, the camera lovingly caresses their nubile, sometimes naked, sleeping bodies, and then, when they awake to find Mr. Grey in their bedroom, the lens captures all their tremulous, flailing, picturesque panic as he assaults and tortures them. 

Adding to the “sexy” vibe is how Dornan’s compelling persona teases and intrigues Anderson’s character right up to the end of Season 2, when, in a moment of charged intimacy, Anderson cradles a doe-eyed Dornan in her arms after he’s been shot. 

I believe creator Allan Cubitt is sincere when he says, “I was at pains from the start to make sure that there was nothing gratuitous or exploitative in the drama.”

But there’s a disconnect between what he thinks he’s doing and what appears onscreen.

A fundamentally different approach is taken in Top of the Lake, in which Elisabeth Moss’s character goes after the man (or men) who impregnated a 12year-old girl. There’s plenty of female nudity, but – shockingly – it’s of the non-rapey, slack-bummed, middle-aged-lady variety. 

The 12-year-old girl is beautiful, but she’s never sexualized. She appears clothed at all times, and in the poster for the show, she’s wearing a winter jacket with a rifle slung over her shoulder. She patently does not fit the classic, sentimentalized portrayal of a vulnerable, sexualized victim.

My point is that the images TV uses to tell rape stories always, without exception, trump the dialogue or supposedly worthy aims of us, the writers. 

It doesn’t matter how much rationalization or feminist rhetoric we cram into our actors’ mouths. 

When rape is lyricized as something that happens to attractive young women, it becomes conflated with sex, which reinforces rape culture.

Since The Fall was created by a man (Allan Cubitt) and Top of the Lake by a woman (Jane Campion), this offers an excellent segue into blaming the usual suspects: Men! The patriarchy! 

And I can offer evidence that sexism is alive and well in writers’ rooms across the land. 

On one show I worked on, after various male writers kept suggesting we rape the female lead to “raise the stakes,” I suggested we rape the male lead instead. They went nuts – calling me “sick” and referring to me as “Man Rape Vanstone” for the rest of the week. (I laughed. But still …) 

As one anonymous female TV drama writer told Variety’s Maureen Ryan: 

“Every single year we get dudes pitching ‘rape the women’ stories and every season I have to stomp my foot in the writers’ room and say no, which I probably shouldn’t do, for the sake of my career, but dammit, NO. 

If rape were so illuminating, such a great story, then you know what? They’d be pitching to rape the men. But that never happens and never will happen, so it’s this blatantly internalized misogyny that drives me nuts.”

“You’re never more aware than when you’re in the room of just how unconscious it all is,” writer Marsha Greene says. 

“Say you have a story with two people who are business partners. One screws over the other. In a male dominated room, if the characters are two men, it’s probably money. 

If the characters are a man and woman, it’s like: 

‘He didn’t like her, or she was in love with him, or he had an affair with her and broke up with her and then to get revenge, she tore down his business.’ 

The default in the room is always that she was motivated by some romantic feelings for this man.”

Some women use a term for making sure a female POV is present when crucial decisions are being made in the writers’ room or on set: “accountable vagina.”

Anecdotal evidence aside, hard data tell the story of a rigidly sexist TV and film industry in Canada and beyond. 

Women In View, a Canadian non-profit organization that promotes gender and cultural diversity, reports women make up 38 per cent of TV writers. 

The Canadian Unions for Equality on Screen just released a study reporting that less than 16 per cent of all directing jobs go to women. 

A study by the Annenberg School at University of Southern California analyzed 11,927 speaking characters for gender roles in film and television, 

which showed female characters wore “sexy attire” more than three times more often than men 

and had exposed skin more than three times more often than men. 

The Geena Davis Institute on Gender in Media has funded a mountain of research showing men onscreen hold better jobs than female characters.

The female-rape trope comes as no surprise when 

women behind the camera are treated as second-class citizens, 

and women on camera are seen primarily as sex objects.

Unfortunately, I cannot in good conscience blame my own rape episode on men. Yes, there were a lot of them: male producer, director and showrunner and a 5:2 male-female ratio in the writers’ room. 

But they were, to a man, committed to a nonsexist workplace and open to ideas from all of us. 

Further, it was my male co-writer who flagged the potential misogyny of the evolving rape plot before I did. 

And the network executives who approved the script were female.

It’s also true that the episode itself had no onscreen violence. No rape scenes. No nudity. The victim’s story was given more time and weight than the predator’s. 

And I have to hand it to Rossif Sutherland – he made the unusual and morally courageous choice of delivering a straight-up evilly banal character, sans any softening mystique. 

The episode might even win approval from the Washington State University researchers.

So who was I supposed to be mad at?

Alas, after a year of angry, defensive stewing, I figured out it was … me. I was the one who ignored my own vague misgivings, who deep down was afraid of rocking the boat with female complaints about feeling “icky” and risking a reputation for being “difficult.” 

Part of it was moral cowardice and part of it was my own warped, male-identified, patriarchy-pleasing brain.

It made me think of the old Pogo cartoon: We have met the enemy and he is us.



Here's her imdb page and she wrote for a show I like Rookie Blue.

She also wrote for Cracked, but I never watched it.




Jan. 14, 2021 TV and movie comparisons:


A student writes or does an assignment about being touched.  A teacher and a parent investigates it:

Titus: The episode is called "The Protector."  This is is the season 3/ series finale of the show.  I remember watching this when I was 17 yrs old.  Amy was touched by Frank.  Amy writes a poem about a rose tattoo on Frank's privates.  

They were all in the men's washroom.

The guys look at Frank's privates in a stall, and there is a rose tattoo.  

How would Amy know about this tattoo in this private part of his body if he didn't touch her?

Or at least he undressed in front of her?


Frank: You will never convict me of this. It's her word against mine.

Amy Fitzpatrick: That's exactly what you said when I was little.

Christopher Titus: Oh, oh. That's it.

[grabs baseball bat]

Frank: Seriously, guys. Don't do this.

[swings back at Frank, but stops]

Frank: Please, no, no...

Christopher Titus: Relax. Important thing right now is Amy.


Erin Fitzpatrick: Right. The best thing for all of us is to help Amy get through this.

Frank: I agree. 100%.

Christopher Titus: Wow. Really? God, man, I am so glad to hear you say that.

[gives bat to Amy]

Christopher Titus: Amy, let the healing begin.

Principal Wells: Wait. I'll go get security.

Christopher Titus: Oh, come on!

Principal Wells: It'll take about 5 minutes.

[pauses]

Principal Wells: Or maybe 30.

[Titus smiles]

Principal Wells: Call me when you're done.


My opinion: This is a sitcom.  They have to resolve and help a young woman get justice for being touched.  They will let Amy beat up her attacker with a baseball bat.


If this was an episode of Law and Order: SVU, they would have to find evidence, and then go through court, etc.


A sitcom is short and not have enough time (30 min.) 


https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0205700/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_7_tt_2_nm_6_q_titus


"Christopher goes to school to confront a bully who has been picking on Amy, however he learns a horrible secret."


"Titus" The Protector (TV Episode 2002) - IMDb


Jun. 24, 2021 Boston Public: The teacher Marilyn Sudor hears a teen girl read a poem she wrote about her dad touching her.  Marilyn investigates and the girl says it's just a poem. 


Marilyn is unsure if she should ask/ accuse the dad of touching his daughter.


Marilyn: What if I'm wrong?

Counselor: What if you're right? 


Later the girl said she accidentally had the video recorder running and she may have taped her dad touching her and hasn't watched it.  If I remember correctly, the tape did have the evidence.


Boston Public (TV Series 2000–2004) - IMDb


This is from my Apr. 2022 blog post:


"This man will pay you $10,000 to find him a girlfriend"/ "Matchmaker, make me a match"/ "Autistic teenager found more than two years after disappearing in California"


Summer Heights High:


"The life of a public school epitomized by disobedient student Jonah Takalua, self-absorbed private school exchange student Ja'mie King, and megalomaniac drama teacher Mr. G."


Summer Heights High (TV Mini Series 2007) - IMDb


Season 1, Episode 4: This is the episode where Jonah draws a picture of his dad touching his privates, so he can get out of English class.


"Ja'mie undermines her relationship with her new friends; Mr. G holds auditions for his new musical; a suggestive drawing puts Jonah's irate father on the defensive."


"Summer Heights High" Episode #1.4 (TV Episode 2007) - IMDb


At the 22-23 min. mark, Jonah, dad, the Teacher and the Counselor are talking about the picture.


(830) Summer Heights High Ep4 - YouTube


When I first saw this in 2010, there was this:


This is:


A. Offensive

B. Funny

C. Both

D. Neither


I was 25 yrs old and I thought this was 95% offensive, and 5% funny.  Now I see this as 99% offensive, and 1% funny.


I remember telling to this to my friends.


Jessica, 23 yrs old: Offensive.

Angela, 25 yrs old: Offensive.

Dan N. 25 yrs old: Both.

Trayton, 20 yrs old: Both.


https://badcb.blogspot.com/2022/04/this-man-will-pay-you-10000-to-find-him.html



My week:


Mon. Sept. 18, 2023 The Swarm:  I have the CW channel, but this show didn't air on this.  

I checked Telus on Demand and this show airs on other channels that I can't watch on.

That's ok that I can't watch this.

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt0808491/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_1_tt_7_nm_0_q_the%2520swarm


Yellowstone: I watched the 2 hr pilot on Global last night.  This was average.  I'll record the series, but I don't know if I'll watch more.

You can watch this on CBS and Paramount +.


https://www.imdb.com/title/tt4236770/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_1_tt_4_nm_3_q_ye


Robyn Hood: I then saw a promo for this and will air on Wed. Sept. 27, 2023.  I'll probably check out the pilot:


"Follows Robyn Loxley and anti-authoritarian masked hip-hop band, The Hood, as they call out injustices and fight for freedom and equality in the city of New Nottingham."

https://www.imdb.com/title/tt20918756/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_0_tt_7_nm_1_q_robyn%2520hood


Telus on Demand: They extend the TV shows that you can watch.  I checked on CTV and Global, and there are shows like FBI that were to end access on Aug. 2023.  I see that they extend access until Sept. 2024.  Probably because of the writer's and actor's strike and lack of scripted TV shows to watch.


Tues. Sept. 19, 2023 Construction on my street: I can feel the vibrations of the ground.  That's how big the construction of the truck paving the road is.


Wed. Sept. 20, 2023 Fiverr: I started a Fiverr account.  I put an hour in to creating an account.  I help you with your creative writing and screenwriting.

https://www.fiverr.com/tracyau2/help-you-with-your-scripts-and-creative-writing?context_referrer=user_page&ref_ctx_id=a5d9f8a9dae91baa4c461f9fdcbca2d5&pckg_id=1&pos=1&seller_online=true&imp_id=330fc043-9ef0-407d-a24c-5c4955fbe96a


The saying: "If you want to get something different, then you have to do something different."

We'll see if I get hired.  I had my 2 blogs for years as a place to show my writing talent and skills, and to get hired as a screenwriter.  I didn't get hired through my blog.



"How Canadian ammonia could help keep the lights on in Japan": Today I found this article by Paula Duhatschek on CBC:

Japan plans to import millions of tons of ammonia in the next few years in a push to decarbonize that country's power generation — an initiative that could present a big opportunity for Alberta's energy sector. 

While Japan was once nearly synonymous with nuclear power, the country's use of that technology plummeted after the 2011 Fukushima disaster. Today the country has one of the lowest energy self-sufficiency rates of any country in the Organization for Economic Co-operation and Development (OECD) and relies primarily on imports of coal, oil and liquefied natural gas for its energy supply. 



Protesters from No Coal Japan Coalition dress as Pokemon character Pikachu as they demonstrate outside the Japanese Embassy in London, England, in May. (No Coal Japan Coalition via Gett)


https://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/calgary/canada-ammonia-japan-1.6971641

My opinion: The picture stood out to me the most.